Startlingly vivid and beautifully concise. A triumph, Dominic.
Lovely, Dominic, and so vivid in its brevity that I feel I'm there with you on that quiet strand of pebbled beach.
and amongst those pebbles you discovered a poem
Dear Dominic, that poem is lovely! Collecting pebbles on the beach is fun (I'm always on the look-out for those with a whole in the middle), listening to the very strange sound they make on shores with big pebbles instead of sand is interesting, though those won't listen to 'hush'.
I love the sound of wet pebbles shaken by the waves. Beautiful poem -- all the best for 2014 and I hope you find whatever it was you lost under the pebbles.
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