Wednesday, 18 November 2009

After the Rain

Jackdaw
on the sunlit grass
like a hole
in space:
black,
jackdaw-shaped

4 comments:

The Weaver of Grass said...

Hm - I think I like this - it conjures up an interesting image. It is true that the jackdaw is such a very black, shiny bird - and if he is stock still - yes I like it.

Dominic Rivron said...

Pleased you decided to like it! :)

ArtSparker said...

Like the zen answer to Thirteen Ways of looking at a Blackbrid.

Poetikat said...

Love this! The positive/negative juxtaposition is great.